Category Archives: musings

When Middle-Aged Men

When
Middle-aged men
Indulge in sinning
With much
Younger women,
Should we condemn
Such men?

Is it merely sinning
When such men
Undress those whose clothes
Are in fashion?
Perchance, when the dance of passion
Is long gone, something lives on.

5 Strong Rhetorical Devices To Use In Your Poetry

My thanks to Desiree Villena for the below guest post.

Have you ever heard someone describe rhetorical devices as the salt and pepper of writing? What they mean is that a dash of alliteration or a sprinkle of repetition can add a whole lot of flavor to your words. However, it’s important to remember that rhetorical devices, like seasonings, are best in moderation. That’s why we’re only going to cover five of the strongest rhetorical devices to use in your poetry, paying particular attention to sound and rhythm — a poet’s bread and butter, if you’ll pardon all the metaphors!

1. Rhyme
Being the device most commonly associated with poetry, rhyme has earned itself a bit of a reputation for being elementary. But in my opinion it ain’t a crime to rhyme!

The strictest definition of rhyme is a repetition of sounds in the final stressed syllables and any following syllables of two or more words. It often appears at the end of the line, which gives humorous poems fantastic rhythm, but there are countless ways to dabble in rhyme! You might experiment with placement through internal rhyme (rhyme that occurs within a single line), or play loose and fast with the rules and try half rhyme (oil, foul) or near rhyme (poem, goin’).

If you like a challenge, take on a double or even triple rhyme scheme and you’re bound to get readers tapping their feet! Think Eminem’s Lose Yourself: “Palms are sweaty… arms are heavy / there’s vomit on his sweater already, mom’s spaghetti… calm and ready… ” There’s no way anyone would call him elementary!

2. Alliteration
Alliteration is the repetition of consonants across successive, stressed syllables… see what I did there? Usually, this means repeating consonants at the beginning of multiple words. If the repetition of consonants occurs anywhere else, the device is consonance.

In The Raven, Edgar Allen Poe uses both: “And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain.” “Silken” and “sad” are alliterative, but with the /s/ sound of “uncertain rustling,” Poe slips into consonance. In case that wasn’t enough, he’s thrown some assonance into the pot, repeating the same vowel sound across “purple curtain.”

Now might be the time to remind you about the danger of too much salt! Alliteration is a very obvious device, so unless you’re Edgar Allen Poe or you’re writing a limerick or cinquain, handle it with restraint!

3. Asyndeton
This one’s super easy. All you have to do is take out conjunctions like ‘or’, ‘and’ or ‘but’ and you’ll have a raging case of asyndeton! Lines of poetry that use this device can either be smooth and elegant, or can create a startling impact by speeding up the rhythm. Take this example from Shaekespeare’s Othello:

Call up her father.
Rouse him. Make after him, Poison his delight,
Proclaim him in the streets.

If you want the reverse effect, slow things down, with polysyndeton instead. This is essentially the opposite of asyndeton — the addition of extra conjunctions — and the steady rhythm it creates can emphasize the ideas in your poem in a number of different ways.

4. Repetition
Poets tend to be wary of repetition: is it lazy writing? Would my poem sound like a children’s book? While there’s good reason to be cautious, a splash of purposeful repetition can enchant readers and pull them into the depth of the poem.

There’s no shortage of examples from poetry, but the use of repetition in the “wild” demonstrates well why it’s so popular among writers. One of the most memorable speeches in history, King’s “I have a dream” speech, used a powerful form of repetition known as anadiplosis — the repetition of the word from the end of one sentence to the beginning of the next. In poetry it looks a little something like this:

I balanced all, brought all to mind,
The years to come seemed waste of breath,
A waste of breath the years behind
In balance with this life, this death.

(An Irish Airman Foresees His Death by W. B. Yeats)

Chaining several instances of anadiplosis together in this way creates an irresistible flow that makes your words impossible for an audience, a judge, or a literary agent to forget!

5. Anthimeria
By now you’ve probably noticed how important sound and rhythm are in poetry, but it can be tricky to perfect them. If you have a line that you’re not satisfied with because it doesn’t quite fit the melody of your poem, or if you really want to use alliteration but you can’t find the right word, you could try a fun linguistic trick known as anthimeria. Simply swap in one part of speech for another — for instance, by using a noun as a verb.

When Millennials use words like “hashtag” a tweet or “Whatsapp” a friend, they’re practicing anthimeria in real time, and they’re in pretty good company. You can hardly read a page of Shakespeare without coming across some new verb hatched out of his brain. His King Lear, for example, complained that “the thunder would not peace” at his bidding!

A Cold, Sharp Bark

A cold, sharp bark
Pearces the dark,
Interrupting a thought
I really ought
Not to indulge in,
Of women
And sin.

In the city
Those who are witty
Say, in fun,
“Civilisation is done”.
Whilst, in the dark
A fox’s bark
Sounds near, and clear.

An Expert In Quick Dressing

An expert in quick dressing,
A pretty lass
Does her hair,
With no sign of stressing,
In his mute glass.

A man’s confession
Of sin, may outlive him.
And her profession
Will continue on,
Though she is gone.

My Review of the Poemhunter App

Poem Hunter logo for apple devices

I recently downloaded the Poemhunter app to my iphone, https://apps.apple.com/gb/app/poemhunter/id918149865.

The app is described on Apple’s website as follows:

“Poemhunter app is the poetry library in your phone with a huge archive of poems and poets of the world literature.

Whenever you feel like reading a poem, tap on Random Poem or swipe right, and see what this brings you. You will find the best poems for your mother or for your valentine.

Poemhunter has over 1.4 million poems from over 100,000 professional and amateur poets. We also keep adding a lot of new poems and poets to our archive every day. Continue to discover new poems and poets with Poemhunter app forever.”

My experience of using the Poemhunter app has been a generally positive one. For example my first use of the app brought up Edna St Vincent Millay’s beautiful poem “What Lips My Lips Have Kissed”, https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/what-lips-my-lips-have-kissed-and-where-and-why/. Having read this beautiful poem, I downloaded the collected poems of Vincent Millay from the Amazon Kindle store, and I’m currently enjoying reading the work of this fine poet.

Poemhunter is a good way of finding new poets and poems and I would recommend the app to poetry lovers.

On the less positive side, I found as a blind user of Apple’s Voiceover screenreader that the tabs within the app are not properly labelled to enable them to work with Voiceover. In addition the sharing buttons appear to be labelled in a language other than English, which makes it difficult to share content.

Poem Hunter logo for non apple devices

For anyone who does not own an Apple device, you can access Poemhunter on the web at https://www.poemhunter.com/.

Literature Today is inviting submissions on the theme of pandemic

Literature Today is inviting submissions on the theme of pandemic. For further details please see below:

Dear Author,
We are inviting submissions for September 2020 issue of ‘Literature Today’. The theme of our September 2020 issue is ‘Pandemic’. You can send us poems, short stories, memoirs and one act plays. The issue will be published in hard copy (Paperback) and digital copy .

For detailed submission guidelines and link of previous issues please visit: https://literaturetodayjournal.blogspot.com/

Writ On A Most Ancient Grave

On a most ancient grave
Is writ,
“Here lies the great Dave.
His wit
Was razor-sharp.
Yet, for all his art,
He ended in this grave!”.

Perchance I Shall Thumb My Nose

Will government do the hokey cokey and close
The pubs (which only reopened on 4 July)?
Scientists cry,
“We maintain, that the pubs must close again!”.
And the electorate thumb their nose
At politicians,
As the country goes
To pedition.

And I think
Of a dry
Autumn to come.
So will enjoy a drink
In the hot summer sun.
And rhyme
‘Ere time
Is called, and the pubs are closed.

And, perchance
I shall thumb my nose
At those
Who would destroy
The dance
Of joy.

The Dissolute Poet

I have awoken
Following a night
Of dissolute fruit.
And spoken
Words most polite
Enquiring whether she
Prefers coffee,
Or tea.

She has put on her party shoe,
And I have thought
On is, and ought,
And on what some lonely men do.
We have said goodbye. And I
Have been left with Dowson’s poetry,
And the thought of is, and ought,
And what a man should be.