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Book Review: “The Ocean’s Lullaby” By Victoria Zigler

This review is of “The Ocean’s Lullaby” by Victoria Zigler.
Disclaimer : I received a free copy of this book in return for an honest review.

The Ocean’s Lullaby does, as the title suggests have a strong ocean theme. The poems in this collection range from the humorous to verses which bring a tear to the eye. Many of the poems are suitable for children, while others will be more readily appreciated by an adult audience.
One of the poems which particularly charmed me is “If I was A Mermaid” which runs thus:
“If I was a mermaid,

I wouldn’t need to sail.

I’d swim through the world’s waters,

With a flick of my silvery tail.

If I was a mermaid,

Who lived beneath the sea,

I’d zoom through the water,

So fast you’d never catch me”.
While the above will, I think appeal in particular to a younger audience, the touching simplicity of the verse will, I think bring a smile to the face of many an older reader.

Victoria also tackles serious issues, for example in her short poem entitled “Wounding Words”:
“Wounding words, like vicious knives,

Rip to shreds our pleasant lives,

Until no joy or hope survives,

And only pain and sorrow thrives”.
We have, I am sure all experienced what is so pithily expressed in the above piece.

Among my favourite poems in the humorous category are “When Words Don’t Mean The Same” and “When North Wind Does Blow”.
I have read “The Ocean’s Lullaby” several times and recommend it as a pleasant and sometimes thought provoking read.

“The Ocean’s Lullaby” can be found here, https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/641375

My answers to some questions from a fellow blogger regarding poetry

I was pleased to answer the below questions regarding my views on poetry, which where posed by Olivia Emily of LibroLiv.

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Answers to questions posed by Olivia

1. Do you think that the internet influences the content of modern poetry?

Yes and no. Events which would have received little publicity in the past are featured online for anyone with an internet connection to read about. So, for example a poet may read about a little known civil war (of which he would have been unaware prior to the birth of the internet) and pen a poem about it.

The world of blogging (for example WordPress) sees bloggers asking their followers to write a piece on a given topic (I.E. a prompt). Some individuals respond to this and by so doing perhaps tackle subjects, via poetry and other means which they might otherwise not have engaged with.
Other writers will confine themselves to purely personal experiences and the content of their work will not be influenced by the online world. For instance a poet may confine himself (or herself) to composing poems about nature and family life and give little (or no attention) to what appears on the internet.

2. Do you think that the internet influences the structure of modern poetry?

I don’t know. One criticism levelled at the internet is it’s tendency to “dum down” by pandering to the desire of many in the online community for easily digestable “bite sized” pieces of information/short stories/poetry etc. Possibly some poets are influenced by the desire to appeal to this segment of the online community. Certainly there are Twitter poets out there who deliberately aim to keep their work within the limit set by Twitter. Some of this Twitter poetry is, in my view, good while some is mediocre or poor.

3. Do you think poetry written in a specific form is conservative? Is traditionally structured poetry holding back a new wave of modern, more liberal
poetry?

Poetry composed in a traditional manner may still express liberal/radical views.
Being told that one must write in such and such a manner (whether that be in rhyming couplets or free verse) is restrictive of the poet’s freedom. Poets can (and do) find their own, unique voice both through rhyming verse and free modes of expression.
One could argue that there is a prevailing dogma that poetry should be written in non-traditional ways, with rhyming poetry being out of favour and being considered as “old fashioned”. Anyone who adheres to the view that rhyming poetry is “old hat” and should be discouraged is, in my view doing a disservice to the craft as are those who insist that “proper” poetry must rhyme. Poetry is a broad church and there is room for many different forms.

4. “Poetry’s meanings are embodied, and complicated by form.” Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

To me a poem’s fundamental meaning is derived from the language/symbolism utilised by the poet, rather than from the form in which the work is expressed. Having said that, sticking rigidly to a particular form may impact adversely on what the poet is trying to convey. For instance a poet who sticks religiously to ensuring a poem rhymes throughout may (by forcing a rhyme where no rhyme should properly be) mar the beauty of the poem and/or lose the essence of what he is trying to convey. It is better to sacrifice a rhyme and by so doing clarify the poem’s meaning than force a foot into a shoe that doesn’t fit and mangle meaning.

5. Do you write with a specific form in mind?

Most of my poetry is written in rhyme. However I will not force a rhyme where no rhyme should properly be.

6. What has your experience with publishing poetry been like? Do you think the publishing of poetry has changed since the internet became more commonplace?

Most of my poetry appears on my website (at present I have, including Twitter followers approximately 2 thousand six hundred followers). I have also produced several poetry collections which are all available in the Amazon Kindle store. Anyone can publish on Amazon and the process is straightforward. Most readers find me via my blog and a few via my Youtube channel.

Prior to the birth of the internet much writing (poetry and other kinds, for example short stories) would have remained in a drawer unseen or only viewed by family and close friends. A few people went down the road of self publishing in print, however, prior to the internet this was very expensive. The internet has democratised the literary scene as anyone with an internet connection can now put their work out there. Getting it noticed/read is, however a rather different matter.

One can not “force” book sales

Checking my Gmail spam folder, I came across a solicitation, from a book promotion service, inviting me to advertise my work on their website. The following paragraph particularly caught my attention:

“The (name of site redacted by me) specialize in making
sure that your book gets seen by readers
as well as media on major platforms to force
sales and with clear visibility”.

I am a simple soul and struggle to comprehend how one can “force” sales. As anyone with a rudimentary grasp of the English language knows, the word “force” implies coercion, compulsion etc. The use of the word “force” conjures up images of readers being frog marched to virtual check-outs and being compelled to part with their money. A virtual version of “stand and deliver” if you like. Surely this is not what the company in question mean by their employment of the word “force”.
One can not “force” another to do something against their will without the employment of blackmail, and/or the threat of (or actual utilisation of) violence. I am sure the organisation in question are not in any way advocating the use of such methods. None the less their use of the word “force” is sloppy in the extreme and does not inspire me with confidence regarding the service on offer. Consequently I wont be signing up with this outfit.

Mind your Phrases!

The producers of “Game of Thrones” threatened to sue a 13-year-old girl for using the phrase “winter is coming” in art work she had uploaded to the internet and shared on social media. The producers of “Game of Thrones” argue that the phrase is central to the series and they own the rights to it.
On the face of it this is a worrying development. Copyright is there to protect the intellectual property of creatives (authors, painters, poets etc). It plays a vital role in ensuring the creator of content gains the credit for their creations and any monies that may be generated. However the phrase “winter is coming” has been around long before “Game of Thrones” was ever thought of. As someone with no legal background I find it difficult to comprehend how a phrase which has been used for centuries can be construed as belonging to any one individual or entity. I once used the sentence “autumn has come in all her beauty”. Can I now argue that the phrase belongs to me? I have no intention of doing so. I could however (invoking the logic which seems to be being employed above) threaten to take legal action against anyone who utilises the phrase “autumn has come in all her beauty”, unless, of course someone else used it prior to me doing so!
As always I would be interested in my readers views. For the article please visit HERE

 

A Place to Relax

As a writer, I try to keep one room in my flat free of technology (so far as that is possible in today’s increasingly connected world). The majority of my writing occurs in my spare room which, when guests come to stay reverts to it’s original purpose as a place where the weary may lay their sleeping heads. The room contains 2 large bookcases, a desk, bed and a wardrobe. On my desk sits a laptop.
I rarely move the laptop into either the master bedroom or the living room as I believe it is important to separate my relaxation time from that spent writing. While the living room contains a television and a hi-fi system, my bedroom has no technology other than a rather ancient talking alarm clock. Apart from the furniture one would expect to see in any bedroom, my place of rest also contains a tall bookcase containing my favourite books. Apart from it’s obvious function as a place for me to sleep, the bedroom is, in many ways my sanctum, the spot where I can relax away from technology, read and, of course “wrap up the ravelled sleeve of care”.
While I do often read in the comfort of my living room, the presence of the television can act as a distraction, hence my liking for the bedroom where technology rarely enters. Our heads are so full of information (much of it fed into it by technology in it’s various forms) that having a retreat where one can be apart from the distractions of the online world and television is, in my view vital to a balanced life. Do I always achieve this balance? The honest answer is no. However having a place where I can recharge my batteries (oops one can not escape from technology) undoubtedly helps me to relax and switch off (so far as that is possible) from my writing.

Does Poetry Need To Rhyme?

A couple of days ago, an acquaintance asked me whether poetry needs to rhyme. My response was that there is no necessity as regards the use of rhyming in poetry. Eliot’s The Wasteland springs to mind as a poem where free verse is employed throughout large portions of the work.
Most of my own poetry does utilise a rhyming scheme. I feel most comfortable expressing myself in rhyme. This does not, however mean that my poems rhyme throughout, (there is no point in sticking to a rigid rhyming scheme if by so doing the poet loses the sense of what he is trying to say. It is better to have a line which doesn’t rhyme than force one and thereby garble the essence of the poem).
I would, as always be interested in your views. Does poetry need to rhyme? And at what point does poetry become poetic prose or simple prose as opposed to poetry as it is usually construed?

Kevin