9 thoughts on “Abandoned”

1. Liz Gauffreau November 19, 2022 at 1:43 pm

   So poignant . . .

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   1. K Morris Poet Post authorNovember 19, 2022 at 1:54 pm

      Thank you, Liz. In retrospect, I wonder whether losing the first line would cause the poem to read better.

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      1. Liz Gauffreau November 19, 2022 at 2:16 pm

         You’re welcome, Kevin. I agree that losing the first line would make the poem scan better.
   2. K Morris Poet Post authorNovember 19, 2022 at 2:32 pm

      Thanks for your feedback, Liz. Its really helpful and confirms my own view of the matter.

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      1. Liz Gauffreau November 19, 2022 at 3:31 pm

         My pleasure, Kevin!
2. OIKOS™- Art, Books & more November 19, 2022 at 5:24 pm

   Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.

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   1. K Morris Poet Post authorNovember 20, 2022 at 8:00 am

      Thanks for the share, Michael.

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3. OIKOS™- Art, Books & more November 19, 2022 at 5:25 pm

   Indeed very poignant. Thanks for sharing, Kevin! Enjoy a beautiful weekend! xx Michael

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   1. K Morris Poet Post authorNovember 20, 2022 at 8:02 am

      Thanks, Michael. I’m pleased you like my poem. You also, have a great weekend. Kevin

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