There is Still Snow (Revised Poem)

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Below is a slight rewrite of my poem “There is Still Snow:

There is still snow

And ice

In the churchyard nearby.

But below

There are no sighs

As vice

And virtue lie

Under December skies.

You can find the original version here https://kmorrispoet.com/2022/12/17/there-is-still-snow/

3 thoughts on “There is Still Snow (Revised Poem)”

Liz Gauffreau December 19, 2022 at 1:13 pm

This version reads more smoothly than the original.

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1. K Morris Poet Post authorDecember 19, 2022 at 4:55 pm
  
  Thanks for your helpful feedback, Liz. I appreciate it. Kevin
  
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  1. Liz Gauffreau December 19, 2022 at 6:34 pm
    
    You’re welcome, Kevin!

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