There is no light
To brighten the night
As I pass
Along the churchyard path
Just gusting wind
Eternal as the rain.
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There is no light
To brighten the night
As I pass
Along the churchyard path
Just gusting wind
Eternal as the rain.
K Morris - Poet 
Those first two lines really flow. The whole poem is perfect
Thank you for your great feedback. I’m so pleased you think the poem works.
Best wishes. Kevin
Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
Thanks for the kind share of my poem, Michael. All the best. Kevin
A visually very strong poem.
Thank you. I’m pleased you like my poem.
Your comment interests me. I am registered blind and use a guide dog as a mobility aid. I can discern the difference between light and dark and see the outline of objects. I can not, however (using my vision as opposed to other senses) differentiate between friends and strangers, and I can not read print (I use accessibility software to compose my poetry).
I lost most of my vision at 18-months-old so only recollect having the limited eyesight which I now possess.
I guess I try to use the limited sight I have to best effect.
Thanks again for liking and commenting.
Best wishes. Kevin