Early October Thoughts

The wind is fresh

Carrying the scents of life and death.

While from a tree

The autumn leaves are falling on me.

 

I lose myself in rhymes

Of passing time

And others who once stood

In autumn’s wood.

 

My friend collects acorns from leaf-strewn lawns

Hoping that Oaks may grow.

Others may see the fully grown tree.

While we will not know.

 

8 thoughts on “Early October Thoughts

  1. SRIKANTH's avatarSRIKANTH

    This is a beautifully contemplative and poignant poem. It captures the essence of autumn as a season of simultaneous decay and hope, personal reflection and collective continuity.

    The contrast between the speaker, who loses themselves in thoughts of the past, and the friend, who actively plants for a future they will never see, is particularly powerful. This adds a layer of selfless faith to the poem’s meditation on transience.

    The closing lines—”While we will not know”—are gracefully humble, accepting the limits of an individual life while acknowledging our small, vital role in a larger cycle. A thoughtful and moving piece.

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