He paid
For new shoes
As hers where broken.
She stayed
For a while
Causing him to smile
And then went to choose
Unbroken shoes.
But girls are not shoes.
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K Morris - Poet 
That’s one that stays with you.
Thank you, Esther. I’m pleased you like my poem
This poignant piece contrasts the simplicity of fixing material things (like shoes) with the complexity of human relationships. The man’s gesture of buying new shoes symbolizes care, but the line *”But girls are not shoes”* serves as a powerful reminder that people can’t be “replaced” or “fixed” as easily as objects. It hints at deeper emotional needs—love, understanding, and commitment—that go beyond superficial solutions. A subtle, thought-provoking reflection on human vulnerability and the limits of transactional kindness.
Many thanks for your great comments. You comprehend my meaning very well.
A fantastic comment on Kevin’s poem. I can say nothing additional to that.