A young lady whose name is Peeches
Likes to frequent crowded beaches.
As she sunbathes in the nude
The vicar, who is no prude,
To that young lady preaches!
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A young lady whose name is Peeches
Likes to frequent crowded beaches
Where she sunbathes nude,
Which some find crude
As for me, I love those beaches!
Lol Kevin. Wouldn’t be, in England though, today! Brrrr! ALTHOUGH………!
Certainly winter is not the best time for such things here in the UK! Thanks for your comment, Lorraine. Best – Kevin
Best to you as well Jevin. See you at the beach – in the summer ha!
Lovely write-up…
The last line of the first stanza wouldn’t mind a “comma” before “preacher”
I am pleased you like my poem, and thank you for your feedback as regards the punctuation.
Most welcome. I enjoyed the read. I put the punctuation as I read so, I was able to pause for effect of the preacher.
Thank you, that is helpful feedback.