There Was A Young Man Named Nile

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There was a young man named Nile
Who kept a crocodile.
Nile vanished last December
O how well I remember
The smile of that crocodile …

2 thoughts on “There Was A Young Man Named Nile”

  1. Andrew Green's avatarAndrew Green

    These are good but could be improved with more attention to the rhythm e.g.

    There was a young man called Nile
    Whose pet was a crocodile
    He vanished December
    How well we remember
    The smile of the crocodile.

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