She will bring her dress and heels.
He will ask about university.
They will talk of the winter weather.
He’ll wonder how she feels
As he takes pleasure
In her short dress and youthful caress.
And hot sugary tea.
She will bring her dress and heels.
He will ask about university.
They will talk of the winter weather.
He’ll wonder how she feels
As he takes pleasure
In her short dress and youthful caress.
And hot sugary tea.
I like this very much.
I’m pleased you like it Liz. I appreciate the feedback as I was unsure whether the poem worked.
I think it benefited from a lack of rhyme. It felt genuine and poignant.
Thank you Liz.
You’re welcome, Kevin.
A lovely poem, Kevin.
Thank you, Vivienne. I’m pleased you like it.