Rooms at different times
Produce
Diverse rhymes.
A girl’s perfume
In a darkened room
May seduce
A man into penning a rhyme
About lust.
Do not condemn
Such men
For there will be time
Enough for dust.
Rooms at different times
Produce
Diverse rhymes.
A girl’s perfume
In a darkened room
May seduce
A man into penning a rhyme
About lust.
Do not condemn
Such men
For there will be time
Enough for dust.
This one struck a chord, Kevin – one of your best I’d say.
Thank you, Eric. I’m pleased it chimed with you. Best wishes – Kevin
As you know I feel hopeless at comnenting, but I really like this one. I like the reference to different rooms, and to our ending in dust. So who is to jydge? We are all going the same way. Love it
As always I very much appreciate your comment, Lorraine. As you rightly say, who is to judge, for we all end in dust. I’m pleased you like my poem.
All the best – Kevin
I always like your pietry Kevin, but some stand out to me more than others. This one stood out.
Thanks, Lorraine. Its great to get your feedback on my poetry. All the very best – Kevin
A super poem, Kevin.
Thank you, Robbie.