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Modesty Forbids

I have blogged previously about my early new year’s resolution to start leaving reviews, on Amazon of the books which I purchase from the Kindle Store (please see https://newauthoronline.wordpress.com/2012/11/29/book-reviews/). I have got off to a flying start by leaving a review of a book which I recently purchased from Amazon. I was, therefore rraring to go, my fingers poised above keyboard, on receiving an e-mail from Amazon asking me to rate one of my recent purchases – that is until I read the title of the book which they wished me to review – “The Girl At The Bus Stop”, by K Morris. To explain, as the author of said book I don’t feel best placed to provide an unbiased rating/review of my writing (can’t think why)! It would have been fun to attempt to rate my own work just to see how robust Amazon’s systems are at weeding out author generated reviews/ratings, however I would have died of shame had my rating actually appeared on the site!

Why you may ask did I purchase a copy of my own book? Simple, I wished to check that “The Girl At The Bus Stop” could be read without difficulty using a Kindle.

Well the above certainly made me smile!

Book Reviews

On 11 November I published my first book, “The Girl At The Bus Stop” using Amazon’s Kindle Direct Publishing. As of today (29 November) “The Girl At The Bus Stop” has been downloaded 195 times. Given that this is my first book I am pleasantly surprised at what seem to me at least to be relatively good figures. However I have as yet received no reviews of “The Girl At The Bus Stop”. There is an old saying that “no news is good news” and I assume that those who have purchased my book are pleased with their purchase otherwise they would vent their displeasure by leaving a negative review on Amazon. I must confess though that I would like to receive reviews as it is always good to know that one’s work has given pleasure to others.

Prior to setting pen to paper (well fingers to keyboard to be pedantic) I had left several reviews on Amazon of books which I’d enjoyed and/or found particularly interesting. I must admit however to being guilty of frequently meaning to leave a review of a book which I’ve especially enjoyed but, in the end never getting round to doing so. My early new year’s resolution is to write reviews of the books I read both to help potential readers and to assist the authors in question. I’d love to hear from my readers so if you have read “The Girl At The Bus Stop” do please let me know what you thought of it.

Never Let The Facts Get In The Way Of A Good Story

The factors which lead men and women to enter prostitution are many and complex, however large numbers of people shy away from complexity preferring to look for all embracing answers to complicated issues. I came across an example of this reductionist approach while browsing the UK’s Daily Mail newspaper on 23 November. In an article entitled “Why Amsterdam’s legal brothels are a lesson for Britain about telling the truth on sex gangs and race” (http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2237170/Why-Amsterdams-legal-brothels-lesson-Britain-telling-truth-sex-gangs-race.html) the author reports on the forcing of young women into Amsterdam’s sex trade. So-called “lover boys”, usually young Moroccan men flatter youthful girls (frequently European) by showing them attention. However once the “lover boys” gain the confidence of these impressionable young girls they cajole and/or force them into Holand’s brothels. The article implies that Amsterdam’s legal brothels are part of the problem as they make it easy for men to force vunnerable young girls into prostitution. If they didn’t exist the reporter implies then, the exploitation of young girls would be rendered far more difficult in the Netherlands.

I have a number of issues with this article. First it’s concentration on the race of the exploiters is deeply troubling. The exploitation of vunnerable people is to be condemned irrespective of the race of the perpetrators. The failure of the piece to mention the exploitation of young women by people other than those of Arab origin smacks of an unpleasant obsession with race. The report is based largely on the work of one lady’s charity which assists the families of those forced into prostitution. The daughter of the charity’s founder was befriended by a man of Moroccan origin and forced to become a prostitute. This is, of course appalling, however to base an article largely around the experiences of a single family (and the charity they founded) is not good journalism. Where are the independent studies into forced prostitution in the Netherlands? They exist, why aren’t they referenced in the article?

Secondly the fact is that men (and women) of all races abuse vunnerable young persons. In the most famous fictional portrayal of paedophilia “Lolita”, it is Humbert Humbert (a white European male) who sexually abuses Lolita.

Turning to the world of non-fiction, the ongoing investigation into allegations of sexual abuse by the late Sir Jimmy Savile pertain to a white European male and (to my knowledge) all of those who have thus far been investigated as other alleged abusers in connection with the enquiry are of white (European) origin.

Men of Asian origin have recently been convicted in the UK courts for exploiting vunnerable (mainly white) young girls and forcing them into prostitution. The reporting of the activities of these sex gangs makes for shocking reading and those responsible for these crimes against children are rightly now undergoing long jail sentences in UK prisons.

Thirdly the article fails to acknowledge that significant numbers of adult men and women enter the world’s oldest profession voluntarily. In my forthcoming collection of short stories, “The First Time”, the main story deals with Becky and her decision to work as a professional escort. Becky is in debt due to her excessive use of her credit card and fears being made homeless unless she can obtain the money both to clear her credit card bill and pay the rent on her flat. One may argue that circumstances are forcing Becky into sex work, however the fact remains that she chooses to become an escort girl, there is no pimp with wrap-around sunglasses, a fast car and a mobile exerting pressure on her. Whether Becky does, in fact have a choice is a matter for my readers to determine but in “The First Time” we see two young ladies (Becky and her friend Julie) who are not subject to the pressure of “boyfriends” (both of the girls are single) but who do, arguably make a positive choice to become sex workers.

Are Becky and Julie as portrayed in “The First Time” representative of those who enter the world of prostitution? While there are people who are trafficked (forced) into sex work in my view the majority of men and women in the west who work in that profession are not compelled to do so. One may question the wisdom of those choices but they are, in my view choices none the less.

 

(The First Time”, by K Morris is scheduled for publication in December 2012. For “The Girl At The Bus Stop And Other Erotic Short Stories”, by K Morris please visit http://www.amazon.com/other-erotic-short-stories-ebook/dp/B00A6H75Y6/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1353246930&sr=1-1&keywords=the+girl+at+the+bus+stop+and+other+erotic+short+stories

Eureka!

On 19 November I wrote regarding the perils of self publishing (see https://newauthoronline.wordpress.com/2012/11/19/the-perils-of-self-publishing/). I bemoaned the fact that despite having paid nearly £400 to have my book published, over a month ago I am still waiting for the book cover image to be e-mailed to me for approval. I’m pleased to report that a bit of firm but exceedingly polite behaviour on my part has resulted in the publishing company promising to let me have the final proof next week so, with a bit of luck “The First Time” will be available for purchase at some point in December. I feel cautiously optimistic but I won’t believe it until I can click on links to “The First Time” and see my book available for purchase as an e-book.

Compared to the problems I’ve experienced in getting “The First Time” published, publishing “The Girl At The Bus Stop”, using Kindle Direct Publishing was as easy as falling off a log. I’ll see how “The First Time” looks once it goes live, however the ease with which self publishing on Amazon works inclines me towards using Kindle Direct Publishing for future books rather than shelling out money to companies offering self publishing packages.

Once “The First Time” is available for sale I will post links to it on this blog.