A sceptic stood on the river bank.
“Jump in
And swim”,
They called to him,
Showing off their strokes.
Having seen it all before
He remained on the bank,
And shrugged as the swimmers sank.
A sceptic stood on the river bank.
“Jump in
And swim”,
They called to him,
Showing off their strokes.
Having seen it all before
He remained on the bank,
And shrugged as the swimmers sank.
Lol that’s pretty bad 🙂 The thought of someone just watching people sink/drowned, not your poetry.
Thank you. I’m pleased you like my poem.
Both funny and sad in a way.
Thank you for commenting. Much appreciated.
My pleasure, glad to support a fellow writer.