I enjoyed this poem by Veronica, hence the share.
I would give my last breath to be with you - We can't find solace in a wistful dream: No pain is greater than a brief adieu! Amidst the galaxy's celestial view, By night and day, my earthly fears grow thin: I would give my last breath to be with you. The sorrowful farewell hits me anew: Your trembling hands, eyes - desperate and grim - No pain is greater than a brief adieu! This ruthless anguish I cannot subdue: Your spirit comes to me - sublime, yet dim. I would give my last breath to be with you… Alas, the woeful memories pierce through My heart, immured…
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This is beautiful. Both the poem and the images. What a good idea to put each verse on an image.
Thank you for appreciating my work! It means the world to me when a writer praises my poetry. 😉
Yes, it makes one’s day, doesn’t it? But that praise was well deserved.
It’s true – especially for someone as young and inexperienced as me; English is my second language, and there are few people I can rely on for constructive criticism! It’s a treasure to receive feedback from published authors – your words inspire me to continue pursuing my creative dreams.