I Know A Young Man Named Rex

I know a young man named Rex
Who’s poems are extremely complex.
He writes them in latin
Whilst dressed in pink satin,
And all the girls love Rex!

I know a young man named Rex
Who’s poems are extremely complex.
He writes them in latin
Whilst dressed in pink satin,
Which does his poor readers vex!

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5 thoughts on “I Know A Young Man Named Rex

  1. Donna W. Hill

    Kevin, I prefer the second ending – I just don’t like the use of “Rex” twice. Maybe something more spicy with the pink satin. Vex is a great rhyme word, but would the readers be as vexed by the pink satin as perhaps one of the girls who can’t get his attention – or one of the boys who can’t either? Still, I love the thing. 🙂

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    1. K Morris Poet Post author

      Many thanks for your feedback, Donna. In retrospect I am inclined to agree with you as I, also prefer the second ending. Your comment made me smile. Best wishes – Kevin

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    2. K Morris Poet Post author

      I shall try to be careful. However ’tis better to smile than to weep, therefore I shall smile while I may, for who knows when my day will end, my friend. Best wishes – Kevin

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